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susan decrescenzo's avatar

I have been enjoying your story. Your descriptions of the characters, and the time period are so vivid. I can see the curtains blowing, smell things cooking, visualize the girls giggling about their favorite movie star. My thoughts would be to stick to the facts. Some movie buff might catch the inaccurate reference and you could loose the reader. I had a harder time time thinking these young girls would soon over Sean Connery. I thought he might be too old for them. Can't wait for the next installment.

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Donna Anderson's avatar

Fiction needs certain elements in the story to make it believable. For me, if the dates don't line up, and I know it, this creates a lack of relatability and authenticity. Matching events and time lines makes the story more interesting, creates an element of curiosity, and better satisfaction with the story and the characters. -just me...

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