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Trish MacEnulty's avatar

Great! Lots of tension. I like the brother! (My ex-husband chewed tobacco. The MOST disgusting habit ever. And the smell was so gross.)

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Gina Hogan Edwards's avatar

Dennis has become one of my favorite characters and is a perfect example of how a character can become someone unexpected as the writer gets to know them. Thanks for reading and commenting. 💜

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